i still seem to be on this odd jag of writing haiku-esque poems. the first one here i'm sure is a genuine english-language haiku. the second is interesting: i have 2 different versions, both of which i like. the 2nd rhymes--can a haiku rhyme? whatever it is, since i can't choose [and come to think of it, why should i?], here are the first poem, the 2nd poem, and the other 2nd poem. [did i just sound like the old bob newhart show?]
Window View
first day of summer.
sky dappled leaves.
Great Book List [1]
Look, there's Charlotte!
Passing out cigars
to a roomful of men.
Great Book List [2]
Look, there's Charlotte again:
Passing cigars to a roomful of men.
Window View
first day of summer.
sky dappled leaves.
Great Book List [1]
Look, there's Charlotte!
Passing out cigars
to a roomful of men.
Great Book List [2]
Look, there's Charlotte again:
Passing cigars to a roomful of men.
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